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| dArtagnanI 2008-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseYeah, well congratulations, because I am starting to prefer your reality over the other reality. My respects to you. |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. I think the imagery is great and I enjoyed the sort of slow journey through the poem. However, the last verse seemed slightly disconnected from the 4 verses previous to it. Perhaps try and relink them? |