Wow... so glad I found this. I love football stories. This definetly brought to mind what Tom Brady might have been thinking that evening of February 3, 2008. :)

Also, you definetly sound like you know what you're talking about. Great! I can't stand people that write about sports and have no clue how to describe plays and things like that.

Looking forward to another update!

-Darlene

I like it. It's a good plot. Great title, too.

You might want to add the 'd' in 'seconds', your story title seems to be missing it ;)

anyway, seems to be a nice story! I'll be waiting for the next chap' ;)