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| kelsi bones 2008-04-13 ch 21,  | abusenikki |
| kelsi bones 2008-04-10 ch 20, | abuseit's so cute when you guys write about the same thing =] k.X |
| k 2008-04-10 ch 19, anon. | abuseNikki: don't be so ** yourself darling. you'll find someone who'll only think of you someday =] Em: you think to much dear. you should question everything, and as much as you please to question it. k.X |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-04-10 ch 19, | abuseLife has its own plans. |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-04-10 ch 18, | abuseBeautiful poem. Amazing. |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-04-10 ch 17, | abuseEm's poem is really poignant and powerful. Last line made me cry O_o |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-04-10 ch 14, | abuseLove the sweet poignancy in the first poem. The imagery is breathtaking. I love "I've never seen a weed so beautiful" and "You can set my world on fire,babe/Burn it down, till there's nothing left/But the angels in the ashes of you and me" Second poem I liked just because of the change of tone. I liked the dismissal of misery and the acceptance of just one good day. "These are the days when reality are perfection" How true. Reality won't always be perfect, though. We need to learn to accept the little gifts as they come. |
| kelsi bones 2008-04-08 ch 18, | abusepretty little flesh girl is so my line :P and here is the question: who is this new girl?? DETAILS! k.X |
| kelsi bones 2008-04-08 ch 17, | abuseEms is super sad =[ give her hugs for me k.X |
| kelsi bones 2008-04-07 ch 16, | abuseYour's is super powerful. The last line ends it amazingly. I'll always love you Nikki |
| kelsi bones 2008-04-01 ch 14, | abuseAw =] it's so cute how you both used the "here, i picked you a flower" line. k.X |
| theinfinitebee 2008-03-25 ch 12, | abuseYou! You better write today! I'm still on vacation but I have internet access at certain points in the day and tomorrow morning when I upload my stuff/check my e-mail THERE BETTER BE ONE SAYING YOU POSTED SOMETHING! Feel better. Nikki: Your work is great, give yourself a break, pour your heart out into it, and love life. You're amazing, and so is Em. Em: You don't know me, but you're amazing. Don't be scared of loving, and follow your heart. ~Withstandingallbarriers |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-03-25 ch 11, | abuseIf I could favourite individual chapters, this would be the one on my list. Both poems are breathtaking... absolutely striking and... *tells you both how amazing y'are for a few more minutes* In the first poem, I love the second and final verses. In the second, the final 4 lines are beautiful. Imogen ps. I love iceskating :) pps. Sorry I haven't reviewed recently... been suffocating in the shreds of me own life. |
| kelsi bones 2008-03-22 ch 11, | abuseYour's is SUPER visual, and i love love love it. The last line is amazing! Em's is sad, but so honest. Hopefully she'll stop worrying about being inadequate and just be happy =] k.X |
| rippling iris 2008-03-21 ch 11, | abuseoh my god these are so powerful. both of you are amazing. these poems are so raw and awesome. i love it. keep up the good work! |