Another couple of great chapters! :) I love how natural the dialog(ue) is. (I can't remember if it's "dialog" or "dialogue", but spell check seems to prefer "dialog", haha) I can easily picture myself and my friends having similar conversations.

Looking forward to new chapters! :)

Pfft, I went for the "next chapter" button and it wasn't there, I hadn't realized I was reaching the "end" so quickly! I'm adding this to my story alert!

Seriously, this is really great, I can't believe it hasn't gotten more attention already. This whole...point of view reminds me of a friend of mine, and it's almost too weird. I feel like I'm poking my nose where it doesn't belong and I have to remind myself that it's not him I'm reading about.

I love your writing style. It's to the point, yet you still pay attention to detail so it's not too dry. Not to mention the fact I've always been a sucker for cynics.

Thanks for a great read and expect more reviews from me, haha!

- Lady Glass