Weird

I like the twists

there are a couple of typos... such as
"actually done my monologue" 'with' is missing

or not?

good WEIRD job though and it made me confused, therefore, made me think.

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Zonne
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That is an AWESOME monlogue! I loved it! I would totally want to do a monologue like this!

You need a beta reader, i.e. someone who reviews your work before you post it. It's not 'monolog,' it's 'monologue.' You don't need the 'to' in the phrase 'I did to do my homework.' And while it might sound like you say 'could of,' it's correctly expressed as 'could have.'

As a reader I would take you more seriously if you edited and corrected your work before you posted it to FP.

I like it! It's fun and random, just like I like things! It made me laugh, which is good, and I had to read it more than once, which is also good. Nice job!

--kyra