Reviews for Never did I hear from you again

Astriella Starfire 2008-04-07 ch 2,	abuseThat's kind of sad. I still love your poetry! : ) luv Krystel-chan
simpleplan13 2008-03-11 ch 2,	abuseSee I think this is so much better... the conciseness helps a lot and the word eradicate is really awesome!
simpleplan13 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseI like the idea behind this piece a lot, but they way it was written could use a bit of work... The first line is a really great start, but the second seems kinda silly... endless thoughts already implies being there fore forever and the second line seems to take away from the powerfulness of the first one in my opinion In the third line I might work on finding a new word for end.. like annihilate or eliminate or something I like the cork metaphor... but I dont think you need both shut it down and stuff it up I think one is sufficient I love the next lien the image of shoving thoughts down into your heart is really powerful The next line is nice too.. looking for someone's pressence is an interesting thought, but the next two lines confused me becuase the last line is never found you but the line before that is about a reply so shouldnt it be never found it? PLus where did this reply come from what is it a reply from? I dunno that line just seemed a bit out of place This piece has some really nice desciptions and defintely has the potentional to be really beautiful
Willy Boy 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseshort simple and meaningful nice piece :)