Cool! New Chapter! Yay! Speaking in really short sentences!

No, seriously I really like this story... were those mensuposed to be rapists?

Fantasy ;)

Yay! ...it does need to be edited a bit though...

Michelle

I loved it! Please continue to update and I'll continue to read.

Meh,

I love this story. it seems so realistic. Lyra seems to need somebody to help her and Father Malachi seems to be the correct person. I hope you are going to keep up with the story and this is not the end but am unsure as to how it fits into the category of fantasy.

Michelle