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| Sonya Elizabeth 2008-03-30 ch 2,  | abuseyou definately have the love part down, true writer for that. i'd advise though, that you reread what you wrote before posting it... there were quite a few misspelled words. i'd also like to say that this one was very, very good. haha its funny b/c i write with green-eyed girls and blue-eyed guys most of the time as well. but man, you had me so into that story. it would be really awesome if you would try writing more to it, i would like to see those two together... eh, the husband can go somewhere else... but why was he away if they're married, and the way you wrote it,its as if she lives in the woods away from civilizaion or something... i'd definately read more if you add chapters. good work, just check spelling! =) |
| daughterofmusic 2008-03-15 ch 2, | abuseYikes! Her husband!! I really hope she can stay with Colin. UPDATE SOON! This was my favorite of your stories so far, keep it up! Dying from anticipation... ~Music |
| Izzey 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abuseexcellent!! please write more please. i think i'll die if u dont! |
| Izzey 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseu have to continue. i'll be waiting for the alert! |