Do I sense a fellow Chuckie P. reader in the midsts?

I like the stream of thought aspect of it. It's a highly related to subject, and this is an interesting way of looking at it. It seems like it might be a very little bit extreme, though. I'd like to hear more about the cause or some reason as to why she's feeling this way.

Thanks for writing!

O... this is interesting. I would be oh-so-happy if you updated! You did a great job!! xp

This is an amazingly deep story, I love your word choice and my absolute favorite lign was Except you, my dear reader, you are the audience. I love how it acknowledges the reader and yet doesnt allow the audience to modify the extremity of the story, great work keep writing!