this story is amaazziinngg!

please update soon:)

The language is really beautiful, just the flow of the words puts the reader in the flow of the story.

AHMAZING

goodness gracious you absolutely positively must ad more

This is nice...there's something about it. but when i was reading it...it made me sad somehow. Because I realized that i don't know...soon they'll grow up and will they still be able to go out like this, skateboard on the street and lay down on the mud in the rain? It makes me feel sad, every time i think about growing up. I think they all wish that this could go on forever. Anyways...it's nicely written. update?

Hey, you have a good story going here. I LOVE it! I like how the beginning has this edgy-wobbly feel to it.

AWESOME WORK! KEEP IT UP!

I really liked this. Very good. Try to update soon :)

Faith

I like this so far! Update soon!

um, wow.

i really like this.

I'd like to see where this goes... certainly a different type of story from "the list," but still interesting. (Alerts.)

I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!

please post more

i love the description of everything

its deep i like it a lot

It's some fantastic writing, as always. I like the characters you've introduced and I want to see how the plot unfolds. In short, I love it.