wow! i think its so cute. you portray quite a lot in your chapters. each chapter telling us something new. i really like both nico and hunter, but currently i feel really bad for nico since she's ignoring him, and the update is so slow...can't wait for the next update :)

Aww, our favorite little person got herself an admirer! So cute.
I always, always love your last sentences. They seem to define the ending of the chapter very well in a contemplative twist-y sort of way. Of course, I am a wee bit disappointed that it's only six sentences. But of course, I still find this style refreshing as always!

HE'S FRIGGIN' ITALLIAAANNNN
I think I'm in love with Fabio. No kidding.
I think I'm in love with M.
But I have a feeling those two are going to end up together...?
Anyway, I loved this chapter - the fact that M just said "he's friggin' Italian of course he's the one!" made me laugh. It was a very sweet chapter, felt a little filler-y, a little foreshadow-y but, I mean, he's friggin' Italian!

Ooh, Fabio Bianchetti. I sense a hot Italian
But regardless, I liked this chapter and how the main character turns him down because of a very small thing. How she's so intent on getting the perfect guy is so sweet.

I'm liking M already, haha!
I guess I'm liking your style. The fact that there are no quotation marks and everything seems to be almost like an observation on everything and the very simple chapter. It gets straight to the point and it's refreshing. Very, very refreshing!

Hmm, I see a very simplistic mood and tone with this story. I'm not too sure if I like it yet, but we'll see with the next few chapters, right?

I loved this list and just how the little things made me smile. I can relate to most, if not all, the choices. And the last one, "He loves me.", just gave me a nice warm feeling. A really nice start for the first chapter!

Just stumbled across your story today. Very lovely, and I hope you will finish it :)

It's cute! But, I can see why people want longer chapters haha. The fact is, the plot (although simple- which is probably half the hook) has a blooming love triangle and naturally readers would want more detail of that! Although, if you continued writing the way you are, it would be just fine, as long as you're pleased with it (I mean, it IS your story - I've always thought readers love stories more when the writer is satisfied with their work).

Well done! :D

Huh. I kinda like this... It's so...straightforward...and awesome :) I'm not really a fan of Hunter. I'm not sure why. I was at first because I was all happy for the main character (do we ever learn her name, by the way?) but he just seems...TOO perfect...

Hope you finish this! If not...oh well it was a fun read while it lasted. You're a talented author :)

Wow- this story is cute and interesting and it's shortness actually adds to how addictive it is! I seriously just read through the whole thing and gaped when I came to the last chapter- I am now busy laughing at the expression I had.

Thank you for the smiles this story gave me- I really want to know what happens next .

Wow this story is very interesting in its own way. I think the shortness of the chapter is blunt and to the point. I like it, perhaps you will find time to finish this piece of work. :)

OMFG that can't be the end! I love how you write and I don't care that the chapters are short! DO I count? Do I matter? If so, I would like you to know that this is the best story I have ever read. I can't believe it ended! I LOVE YOU!

I kind of pity Nico. Hunter is perfect! 3 If only there was some real person like him. But isn't he too perfect?

Anyway, please update!

It is short. On every chapter.