I love the title on this segment! Even though I always think Romeo and Juliet is one of Shakespeare's "lesser" plays, because it is so over the top. Plus Juliet is 12.
And I totally know what you mean about writing essays! Speaking which of it's currently 2:30! Um, screwed, much?
I completely like Nico and I don't understand why he likes her. She seems very cold to people.

Nico is too good for her!

Hmm...I don't feel much sorry for Brendon, since we knew he wasn't the ONE. But I love M! Gosh, I love M. So much more than Main Character Brat.

AH, she's starting to annoy me! Some things - such as appearances - should not be so important. She is soo soo picky. :) But the concept is still my favorite.

So far this story is shaping up to be a very lovely concept - not to mention, your writing is a doll. I love the dropping of commas and the very *there* voice she has. I love her list - it is very nearly perfect. (The fact he wouldn't ditch his friends for her is so very telling and so much more significant.)
However! This girl really is picky, though so far the two candidates for her do seem to be lame and conceited. Especially Neil...would anyone actually do that?! Something else interesting I noticed...you are very review-hungry girl. Let's not seem desperate/Neil-like now, shall we? :)
But so far I love it, yes. I love the lengths of the chapter; so refreshing.

I like the list. I think the girl's really smart. I don't have time to read the rest now, but this looks really good.

I didn't expect much with the first few chapters, but i've come to really like it.

She should end up with Nico more than Hunter(even if his name ROCKS).

Ha, this story cracks me up. I love it.
"I tell her I feel like a **.
She says to be a good one."

So funny. :)

wow...the guys must dig her...

OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO GOOD. YOU ARE LIKE MY FAVORITE PERSON EVAH! and i agree Hunter = WAY better than that Cullen kid :)

cool story. Update Soon!

I want to find out why Nico was angry. I still like him! :3 But I feel really sorry for him.

This is really cool. I was a bit intimidated by the amount of chapters but since they're short it's much easier to read this.

Your girl sounds different and sweet, albeit a little odd.

so.. when does she kiss nico?.. :D
she better end up with nico.
update please! :)
xoxo

I love that it's vary short

Love it