way to short. It is annoying to try to find the story. It is unreasonable & not worth it. Good plot.

Love it.
So simple.
I think Hunter reminds me of Christofer Drew from NeverShoutNever!
I love them both.
I've joined the Hunter Birdell campaign.
Update soon.

Oh my goodness, I absolutely love this story! Even though the length is short, I think that it's more fantastic for it. It certainly leaves an impression.

Hunter is so awesome!! Why is it that we can only come up with the perfect guys in our heads? And in lists? I seriously think that we should go around posting that entire list all over the US. Maybe that way, some boys will get a clue and not be so stupid.

I would suggest some ideas for you but it seems just so perfect, the way you come up with your short little stuff, that I don't think it would work really. I'm more of a long chapter type gal so I'm not entirely sure how to help you out.

But I'm perfectly sure that you'd get over and around and over the moon with your writer's block and um... the only advice that's probably really stupid to receive is to write from your heart. And just let it out... erm... yeah. Haha!

CanNOT wait for the next one.

i just read this, and even though the chapters are short, they're really good. i'm sorry you have writer's block. but in the summary you did say she wasn't happy. so make her un-happy! :]

love the story ..its quite different in the way its written..anyhow i see you have writers block, and I'm not sure if i can help you but if i come up with anything i'll be sure to let you know =)

-kay gee

i like your story, dont get me wrong. its very creative and funny. but it is getting increasingly difficult to read. short chapters are fine, and making impact is good, but im getting frustrated with the pages of you replying to reviewers. the pages take forever to load because of them... and if we're here to read the story... all your authors notes, replies, and begging for reviews just make me think that it is not worth it anymore.

I love your story! Nico is cooler than Hunter... Hunter's just annoying... No offense. He's just too perfect...

okay. i am 16 and im a secretary on monday nights. normally i read stories by them same girl. but tonight i thought, hey let's venture out. too bad i waited so long to do it. i am only on chapter twenty, but really just love this story. :) it is so incredibly cute. kinda reminds a bit of a movie called lucky seven. also cute. but i love that your chapters are short and sweet and i love that the dialogue is biting and i love that all of your characters have first and last names, (personally i struggle with that.) i wish my job ended at ten instead of nine so i could stay here and finish this adorable story. im itching to find out what happens next. "the boy", well, he sounds adorable. long enough? yeah. actually, this review is longer than most of my actual stories. ~rae.marie.gee

This isn't long, this is half a page.

It's kinda hard to review when the chapters are so short, and there's nothing to review on.
Good concept, you can do so much more with it.
But really, the size of these chapters are bordering ridiculous.

Thats really cool.. there are alot on things on your list that are on my own.
so i guess its really nice

New to your story. (:
Hm, if you need help, I could give you some ideas? -shrug- She's not supposed to be happy, right? So you should start making her see how repetitive it is with Hunter and get her to start getting bored. And add a little more Nico-the-secret-admirer in there because we all know it's him ;)

There's something about this that seems so...real. :o
My LIST:
1. he doesnt care that i get emo.
2. but he cant stand it when i cry.
3. we take turns deciding what to watch for movies.
4. he doesnt have fakely stright teeth.
5. he never gets buzz cuts.
6. he loves animals and children.
7. he gives change to the homeless.
8. sometimes he gives apples to the homeless.
9. he likes my body the way it is.
10. he thinks my lack of cheekbone is adorable.
11. he writes.
12. he's smart.
13. he's funny but also intense.
14. he doesnt like hip hop.
15. but he likes classical.
16. he dresses nicely but doesnt obsess over it.
17. he can draw.
18. he kisses me on the forehead.
19. the PDA has limits.
20. he gets along with my parents very well.
More later. :D

Hey good stor! it takes awhile to get used to since all your chapters could be fit into one of most peoples... but still good! Hmm... i dont know what should happen next... come up with somting good..l.

Very cute story! I am amazed at how you can make your chapters so short but it is still really good to read! The way you write is really good. I have no idea what the girl's name is!? I think I may have forgotten it! In the begininning it was funny and I thought that she was stubbon!
Please make Nico a better guy! I like Hunter and the girl but I also like Nico!
Love Fabio's name! So cool!
Please update!
GREAT JOB!
C