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Reviews For: Son Of A Rockgod

sophiesayshi
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abusehi! thanks for your reviews. just to say, i have unbolded my stories at your request!
this story was a really good read, you are VERY talented! it was really interesting to read because most of the time, i write in third person, in past tense. maybe first person present tense isnt so bad either. actually, you write with it really well!
EllyMurk
2008-04-22
ch 5,
abuseThis story is so cute! It's not too dramatic or too boring, and the pace is pretty good. The characterization's convincing and so is the sequence of events, mostly. I literally had a jaw-drop moment when David told them his bank account number, so that worked too, though I think there'd probably be extra safeguards against identity theft... Anyway, it's awesome.
Lurid Black
2008-03-22
ch 3,
abuseSweet, I like the dialogue and its descriptions, vivid imagery, and well written, keep writing
~Lurid~
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