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| Jave Harron 2008-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseNice story of terraforming on Mars. Ever read the "Red Mars/Green Mars/Blue Mars" series? |
| dreamshell 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting bit. I think this short tapped into the character more than the previous story of yours I read. And while they took a backseat this time, your sci-fi concepts still seemed thankfully harder than most, as well as paradoxically exotic and commonplace. It amused me, because I could find things like the holographic busts and the artificial sun both strange and enticing ideas, as well as somehow unextraordinary, which I imagine they would be to a boy such as Danny. --dreamshell-- |