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Speckleddove 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseI like the title -and the poem made me chuckle! The beat of the rhyme is a little off in places, but I know I have trouble with that myself sometimes so it's not like i can talk. Enjoyed reading it though! ;)
me. moi. ich. 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abusealthough kinda "iffy" in some spots, i really like it- somewhat random, but very entertaining :)