Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)

Hope to read more soon!

~Carm~

Good chapter. Just one thing, when someone is talking to someone, such as; "That's almost one hundred and fifty years, Brooke." You need to put that comma in. Or when you're saying like, "Gill,..." You gotta put a comma in. Get what I'm saying? Hopefully you do. lol. Keep it up and update soon.
Faith

A bit confusing, but I liked it. Just work on like...the order in which you tell big secrets, like Marney being the slayer. Make it clear, a bit less confusing. Keep it up :)
Faith

This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!

~Carm~

I liked the last two chapters. Couple of things: when someone new speaks, they get their own paragraph. You don't just keep adding them into one paragraph, that's too confusing. Also, when you write down number, it would be easier and a bit more professional to spell them. Like, two-thousand thirty-one. Or whatever his age was lol. Other than that, I like it! Keep it up and update soon :)
Faith

I liked it. Just be careful of your spelling. Fallow should be follow, things like that. Also, don't use ' ', those are mostly just for quoting inside diologue. You can say, and she shook her head no. You don't need the ' '. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

This story just continues to amaze me. I love every bit of it! I hope to read more soon :)

~Carm~

I liked it. Good chapter. There's definitely a lot of questions we need answered, so be sure to update soon!
Faith

I liked this chapter. Good job :) Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

~Carm~

I liked this chapter, and was excited to see you had updated. One thing, you can put the diologue with the action sentences. Like this, Kane blushed a little at the thought of a her being at his house at that kind of an hour,

"Tonight?"

You can put this together so it'll be this: Kane blushed a little at the thought of a her being at his house at that kind of an hour. "Tonight?"

That's the only error like thing I saw. Keep it up and update soon, this was a good chapter!
Faith

good job :) Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

Lovely. This was an amazing chapter.

Hope to read more soon :)

~Carm~

great chapter, I liked it. Keep it up!
Faith

great start, can't wait for more so be sure to update soon!
Faith