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| wilko4523 2008-03-11 ch 56,  | abusewow, this is really gd-glad gilly finally came round and decided to help his friends i liked the build up of tension too however the chapters were quite short really i dont find anything wrong with this lol- but as my internet was being slow i found it quite annoying as it didnt feel continuous wilko xx |
| wilko4523 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abusethanks-for puttng this up dont worry i wont pester you that much or atleast for perhaps a couple of days :P wilko x |