That was pretty funny, I liked it a lot. But you used the wrong "there" when you were talking about handing out "their" prickly balls. But still, it was a great story!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

lol, nice! i never thought about the poor mice... it's a really creative idea! congrats. just one thing that bothered me: you used the wrong "there" when you were talking about the prickle balls. It should be "their prickle balls." sorry, i'm just kinda anal about that kind of thing. apart from that, great story!

--kyra