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| Glenfinnan Girlie 2008-07-24 ch 21, | abuseI really liked your story. I spend four whole hours reading it, I didnt get to sleep til just before 6am - woops! Getting to bed while the birds are cheaping is not a good idea! Good luck in the skow awards and I hope to see something new from you soon - because you're a really talented, realistic writer! |
| Kar3b3ar 2008-07-23 ch 8, | abusevery interesting... was the whole situation with paige based on true events? i'm really happy again that you used big sisters to show how one person can change a future :) and i love Zoe's innocence too, its oddly cute not annoying like i thought it would be and poor colton lol another thing i'm happy about was that you didn't make colton's character into a bad boy changing naive Zoe like i've seen so many times. |
| Kar3b3ar 2008-07-23 ch 2, | abuseaw...i love this idea. this would make a great chick movie lol i like the reference to big sister little sister first time i've seen it i was in it, but now i'm thinking of turning from a little sister to a big sister. |
| sussex 2008-07-23 ch 21, | abusei love this! i love zoe and colton. she is a wonderful girl and though colton was fickle, i am glad he and zoe are together. sigh. jus wish to witness their wedding or their years together after a few years. great and absolutely fab story, Tatiana! :-) wish i can go on and on... |
| B. Penn 2008-07-21 ch 20, | abuseBest fictionpress story ever. Also, Paige is hilarious. |
| Faded Lilac 2008-07-20 ch 21, | abuseGreat story! I will be totally voting for you ~ ^^ By the way, I don't know about you...but have you ever thought about writing a sequel - if ever you feel the urge/inspiration - about Minnie and Ben?! I really think it's just BEGGING to be made! |
| N.M.E 2008-07-20 ch 20, | abuseI LOVED IT! What an amazing story! IT WAS SO GOOD! So cute and romantic. The last few chapters were the best! LOVED IT! |
| casey 2008-07-19 ch 21, anon. | abuseI really wish you'd write an epilogue for this amazing story! It seems like every reviewer was rooting for one.. hopefully, you'll change your mind in the near future!! Great job on this wonderful story. |
| rjdickert 2008-07-16 ch 20, | abuseAHH! So AMAZING! I like stories like this, cliche i know, but still good :) |
| Liz 2008-07-16 ch 21, anon. | abuseThis was kind of beautiful. Really beautiful. Very, very, satisfying- I haven't been keeping up with fictionpress just because it seemed to me that there were less 'good quality' stories. I checked out SKoW on a random whim (I used to keep up with it) and my faith has been restored. You are a really, really good writer. ♥ |
| glamoureste 2008-07-15 ch 20, | abuseAw... yaay! That was so cute. I kinda liked ben, but it was probably because i loved seeing colton jealous. hah. |
| Lalaith7 2008-07-15 ch 7, | abuseI just had to tell you how much I love that Zoe has had weight problems in the past and that you portray her continual fears so realistically. Several of the people close to me have also struggled with weight and one of them mentioned just this year that the hardest thing is that even after losing weight you still see yourself as fat, so Zoe seems so incredibly realistic to me. Not to mention I've never dated either and thus can relate to her that way. Thank you for making a character with very real struggles. |
| DOMOxKUN 2008-07-14 ch 21, | abuseOkay :) Let me tell you that I TOTALLY love this story and it's amazing with or without an epilogue ... though it would be even MORE amazing if it had one ;) Also, I'm in love with Ben~ Maybe if he was like 18, I'd actually WANT him more but like his personality is AMAZING. And no, not many things are amazing to me :3 |
| JusticeWriter 2008-07-14 ch 21, | abuseAw. This was an amazing story. :) |
| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-14 ch 20, | abuselove the ending ;) im sorry if i frustrated you with my earlier comments - i tend to get antsy after reading chapters like that lol.. i want you published one day!! |