I agree with those two anonymous reviewers. Are you in love with this friend? It sure seems like it. I agree with dragoness about how it doesn't sound like a poem and I agree with Lafonda about how you lost so many friends. Friends move on. Get on that bridge and just get over it.

great job! you really put a lot of effort in your poems! and that what makes them great!

it kinda sounds like a love letter...who is this for? it doesn't really sound like a poem though either... are you writing to ur ex?

it really sounds like you really want to get back with him. good.

Hmm...it seems to me that your in love with this "friend".

Second of all how many friends have you lost girl,

Maybeh it's not this friend's fault but it's your own fault that you have lost so manyy friends.

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Good writing though.

I've lost a friend before, a friend of six years. Its one of the hardest things in the world. This poem really shows the emotional pain and confusion behind a lost friendship. God Bless!