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| crimson-reverie 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abusei take that back: this one is my fav one chapter story thingy. |
| hateful-black-nights 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseRefreshing. Nice description of lust. |
| Ashelin 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was quite a good poem, though there were a few instances where you didn't capitalize "I" and instead of "you" you wrote "u". Other than that, it was great. Keep up the good work. |