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Mienaku 2008-03-12 . chapter 1
Beautiful princess sitting up there,
please to let down your wonderous hair.
I grasp it and pull, you'll kick and you'll scream,
I'll rape of all that you hope and you dream.
And when I am done,
oh such wonderful fun!
I'll leave you to lie in your pieces of dreams,
then surely you'll realize,
there are no princes, only men that scheme.

T__T Your poem is sad. Like you're waiting for something that you never expect to come.
onyxdragonflyy 2008-03-12 . chapter 1
oh!! How wonderful! I like the lines,
" This idea of happily ever after, love seems a ruse..."
And "How can morbid and pessimistic wonderings,
play w/ the innocence & hope of happiness?
It's a quandry the brave dare not pursue,
for fear of becoming lost among them too."

That how bit made me really think. It really clicks how the words played out to make sence of somethink I had no really thought to wonder before. At least, not like as such.

Beautiful job as always my dear.
I shall be adding this to my favs~
jason 2008-03-11 . chapter 1
^^ you want some of my light? you can have it. i dont need it^^
i liked it.
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