Reviews for Alone on the Road

Isca 2008-05-23 ch 1,	abuseWow...
Needa S 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseSad but great images. Keep up the great work.
simpleplan13 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseOK a few things. I didn't like the repetition of wait so much and my arms wait for you to hold seems awkward. Also the ending confused me wit the punctuation. Is it that you plead with your mind and heart and the you cuts you open? in which case I think there should be a period after heart or is the you the heart cutting you open... the first seems more likely, but grammatically it says the second Anyhow I like the image of you being alone on the road.. that was really great and I also liked the word plead and that you're pleading with your mind (and maybe your heart) instead of with words... the last line was also really powerful