Reviews for reves dans la mer

explosion of planes 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abusei can understand some of the french, i can't say i have a favorite line, the whole thing's beautiful.
ilovetheopera 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abusei.. think this poem doesn't really work if one doesn't know what the french bit at the end means; fortunately i fed it into the babelfish online translator and got a rough approximation. would i be right to say it means, roughly, "our spirits are free"? i don't know. please do clarify as i think it makes a great difference to the poem. on the other hand, i can't say i dislike this- the french i didn't udnerstand wasn't enough to deter me from liking your simple two-line verses. the first line is really good and it drew me in, and i really like how the persona seems to fall deeper and deeper, drowning.
perpetual questions 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abusei like the surreal imagery and fanstastical sound to it. nice. in the last line, don't you mean "ce soiR"?
electric feel 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abusethanks! roughly, tonight our minds are free
Jenny Van Alles 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abusevery good rhythm for a free verse. Can I possibly get a translation for the last line?
Lady Fingers 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abusedaniel i didnt realize this was you i need to re read love you