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a silenced revolution 2008-10-28 . chapter 1
i adore the idea of escaping
on a sea of ever expanding fiction
and the way you describe graveyards
in the fifth stanza: (maybe) cries for help.

haunting
because it's (so) true.

and the ending is so strong. tangible. raw.
perfect.
Jenny Van Alles 2008-03-28 . chapter 1
I just love your poetry. The way you structure verses is amazing.
Good use of repetition in this one.
Lady Fingers 2008-03-19 . chapter 1
I'm a little bit aware
and very much afraid
that the repercussions of his actions
are the cause of my decay.

Hear me out, old friend.

I shake when any touch gets too close,
except for the Wind.


this is so amazing
these words make me feel
a little less lost
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