Very vivid and realistic descriptions, feelings, and thoughts. Everything seems to be going well, but then the narrator is gone. This is a very tragic but at the same time, comforting. Great job.


-C.N

Good. I am left wondering why the narrator "disappeared" when everything seemed to be going so well. Your descriptions are good, very vivid, realistic, very well matched with the words around them.

~Nemonus, who haunts the "Any poems you want reviewed?" thread.