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.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-03-19
ch 1,
abuseI'm sorry but I'm really curious... is this about your mom?

*cyber hugz.* Cheer up dear. Someone will always be there for you. =]

-stix-
Twilight Starr
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
melbell
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abusethis is good.
i like.
XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseHm...I like how some feelings people never write about then you come across someone who has then you relize you can relate. Nice job.


XKristie MarieX
Amertie
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseI loved the emotions in this. It's very beautifully written.
Where does your inspiration come from?
simpleplan13
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseI like the idea of being alive, but not meaning physically more emotionally...

There were a two words though... lucid and words spent that seemed a bit like they were put there for the rhyme, but other than that really great piece
maximusrexmundi
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuse:) it seems like it has been forever since you have written a poem. Not sure if that is a good thing or a bad considering the topics they usually touch. Anyway on to the review!
Good, as always. I do like the message behind this one. It is hard to say what you feel if they dont ask it in the right way, just as it is hard to answer any question the way people want if they leave half of the question out. Very good! :)
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