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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god. This is not bad. This is... amazing, so true. You have no idea how true. Keep it up, dear. If I have to live ...so do you. =] -stix- |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI think this piece is very expressive and relateable. I hope you stop neglecting yourself for others or at least take some time for yourself. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| melbell 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusehmm. that was very interesting. in fact, im going to go read it again... |
| casi 2008-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseone part is a bit difficult, it doesnt really flow, unless its my reading that is causing this.. but the part that says "I'm not allowed to be remiss" is difficult. Otherwise i like it very much, very good. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNope not bad at all. I can totally relate! Some of my friends are like that but when I go to them they say' Well you no what happened to me...' andthat doesn't help. Sounds like you need some true friends. XKristie MarieX |
| maximusrexmundi 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseBad bad indeed... did I mention that you and I are practically the same? lol I will say it again here if I have. There are some people that others always turn to for comfort or advice, just because you are a good listener, and they know that you will accept them regardless of what they tell you. As you said, they rarely realize that you are hurting too. Hang in there. If this is the place fate has chosen for you, then all you need do is make it your own place, not what others force onto you. :P and I know you probably hate it, but you can always complain to me. |