good rhythm and rhymes, you describe the situation in an direct way effective of conveying the emotion. nice job.

Definitely can relate. Great job. -pockets

This is amazing. It's ...just amazing. I don't have anything else to say about it.

-stix-

I liked the rhyming. Nice work. :D

~Twilight Starr~

YEAH!

i like the ending.
yippy!
=]

Great poem.. Horrible situation. Ever need to talk let me know. Nicely written.


XKristie MarieX

Hmm, it is great you should have posted it sooner! :P I love the line: "But do you want to hear the honest truth? I am sick of being cold and 'aloof'." Mind if I quote you?

“A Boy? Psh. They will never hurt me! No way!”... A boy? He or Boys? They

I like the rhyming and I also like how realistic this piece is. You're not asking the person to agree with you, just be there for you. It's such a simple request that is expressed very well