this cracked me up! I loved it! I always did think it was rather anticlimactic the way that story ended...i like yours better *grins*

Awesome! I loved the twist to this. Very funny.

- Koki

Haha I love it!!

Heeheehee! I love this...I was so sick of Shakespeare class--it was driven into the floor! But this made me crack up. Strangely I didn't flash back to reading Romeo and Juliet but watching that action parody HOT FUZZ, the scene where the have to go see the community presentation of R&J and it's the one with Leo starring instead of the one by Sh., haha. Anyhow. Now that I've rabbled on in something akin to chat-speak...Excellent work. I love that you worked in Juliet's line--those were some of my favorites: "O happy dagger" to make its way ,/to plunge deep within me to stay."

I like to think that this was Juliet's thought process and that she wasn't as stupid as she could appear to be (as she was discussed in class).

Haha good job again. I like the whole "Romeo you idiot" thing. Thumbs up!

Tee hee.
You made me giggle.
=D
Very lovely.