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Thoughtful Silence
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseSo true to life and put in a sweetly vulnerable way. Loved the title of this one by the by, it just fit perfectly!

-Silence
flawlessangel08
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseaww sweet love it
black.sharpie
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseahh burtle turtle this hiaku reminds me of me...
Faith Adeline
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuselove it. great piece.
Faith
painted.music
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

As usual, I am in awe of your hiaku-composing abilities. The word "stuck" made me think of a broken record. It just keeps playing over and over and over. That's what I thought of with this person's thoughts -- constantly on whatever boy or girl he/she is thinking of.

Ha det
-Shan-
fairytale failure
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseI love this one! The connection between title, summary and poem is great, again. Short and sweet (and I know how you feel.)
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