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| simpleplan13 2008-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseto me the would sound better with past tense like your eyes would turn grey... as these visions drew you in of the turmoil to come... that sounded awkward, maybe impending turmoil or turmoil awaiting us? I love the the whole gray/blue eyes because you can see that color and the kinda impending doom in this piece is really great |