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| BellaEzrebetFang 2008-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseSimply lovely. |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-08-10 ch 8, | abuseGenerally I'm not a fan of haikus, but the metaphor of the sun-shrivelled ink and salty pages is just beautiful :) Love it. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-08-06 ch 6, | abuseLove the alliteration in the last line. Nicely written. Keep writing! :) |
| Lucid Raindrops 2008-08-04 ch 10, | abuseWow, this is beautiful. It makes me feel so peaceful and calm. I love your word choices. Great job with this! :) |
| Laura Schiller 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseAll of these are beautiful, I love the images of whispering earth, moon tears, fairy lights etc.. |
| Thenardier 2008-06-13 ch 7, | abuseBeautiful, this reaches out to the romantic/naturalist in me. |
| Thenardier 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseGah, you did such a nice haiku on echoes, I can't possibly write one now. Haha, amazing job. |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-06-09 ch 8, | abuseI loved this one... simple as that :) |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-29 ch 7, | abuseWow, all these haiku are great. Your imagery is so vivid and creative! I love "Lazy Days" the best :D |
| Aethra 2008-05-29 ch 9, | abuseYour words are beautiful and Magical. I can't take my eyes off XD I love Earth's Whisper, Echoes and Water. |
| Katsaya 2008-05-25 ch 9, | abuseyou never cease to amaze with your poems. I thoroughly enjoyed this collection. |
| Rhea Anne 2008-05-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseNice collection of poems. Most people forget about haikus cause they're not always a lot of fun. :) I like your imagery and thoughts though, simple but colorful. Ray |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-05-03 ch 5, | abuseWow, that is beautiful. I love all the different and vivid imagery that's happening in this. It's stunning. Keep writing! :) |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-05-02 ch 4, | abuseI love how ethereal this haiku is; it is very fantasy inspired. The idea of the earth being its own creature, speaking aloud. That's great. (Yeah, this review is probably sounding odd, but I've been very poetic today, very productive, and I haven't eaten much of anything all day, too, so that could have something to do with it.) Keep writing! :) |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-30 ch 9, | abusewinter is pleasant to think about, but I still hate shoveling snow. |