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| Ashelin 2008-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseTime and space is cruel to love. I can relate. Good job. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI didn't like the repetition of leave in the last two lines, but other than that I really love this piece... the idea of making our heart beat more is interesting and really great |