Eh, this is like reading a five year old's writing after his dad showed him **.
A lot of repetitive misuse of words. No fluidity in the writing either. Everything seems like it's being done by robots.
"She did this." "Then she did that." "She did this, then that, then this as well!"
Weak writing. As for the story itself, eh, nothing special.

Yay, another chapter!

Great job with Miranda and also Jesse's almost remorse for destroying Kimy and her drawings. Kim and Dekoda are very interesting...

Please update soon! The suspense is killing me! :-D

Yay, another chapter! Kat and Kim just attract trouble, don't they?

Please update soon!:-D

Another great chapter! You've really captured how Kat and Miranda switch.

Yay for Kimmy managing to escape! :-D

Wow, another great chapter!

You're doing a great job with Kat and Jesse. I loved the surprise of him throwing Kim off the roof. It was so shocking--and perfect! :-D

Yay, you posted the beginning! I'm very excited to see what you're going to do with this story.

You've done a great job capturing Jesse so far. :-D