Man, this one was pretty good too. You have great character distinction, and your characters are pretty unique. So are your stories, they're pretty fucked up haha.

Loved it hon.
~DollFaceDantes~

Creepy, This Tony kid is one sick fuck. Good story, but not something you wanna read to your kids at night.

interesting.. a little disturbing but it's pretty logical. although i find myself doubting that anything like this would ever happen in the town i live in, but who knows

the descriptions in the first paragraph kind of bored me out though. it could just be me, but it seems overly long and i couldn't help but think 'err.. i get it already'

but once i got past the first paragraph, i really liked the scene and the characters... and the poor hobo. i'm never going to look at one the same way ever again (which is good i suppose, leaving an impact with your story)

also, i'm guessing your did this on purpose, but the way you ended this makes me want to read what happens next