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| Faith Adeline 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusegreat piece, i like it Faith |
| Ashelin 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI loved the imagery and forlorn feelings created in this poem. The repetition was nice too. "created music on her dotting, pregnant foothill" I really loved that for some reason. Anway, good job. |