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| fatbird33 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseaww sad, but mighty good |
| jrsparkus 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusenice, it's deep in a sense and pretty awesome. i have to ask, do you write any poems that rhyme? i'm not nagging, but thats my favorite kind, because their like a puzzle when you write them, and i was wondering if you had any you were hiding from the world.^.^ |
| Guardrail 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseHey it's been a while. This is really beautifully written. There appears to be some underlaying themes that aren't apparent at first glance in this poem. I'm not too sure what it's supposed to mean exactly, but the imagery and the emotions are crystal clear. I love the intricacies. Awesome job! |