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Jon Blue
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI think that's supposed to say Where can we...? because it is a question.

laced a little too much in ambiguity that I don't quite get what exactly you are shootin for, but I like the line This is where Hitler is reincarnated into pencil skirts and blond frizzy hair...I think that line is so good you could, or at least I could, write a book from that line alone...plus it sums up what high school seems to be. conformity and high school drama/politics, it's so ridiculous. anyway I kind of know where you were trying to go, just didn't get there like you did.
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