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| xoPeace 2008-06-14 ch 9,  | abuseholy crap. shes got herself in a pickle. god chap. short. but way good! short chap = short review. but wow riley at dawntill. dang. this oughta be interesting. |
| muchmusiclove 2008-06-13 ch 8, | abusethe minute i read when her isster friend said he will never forget i was lke sh!t no she wouldnt dare but she did riley dun duh dun |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-06-13 ch 9, | abuseI'm completely lost! Who is Hayden and Mia and Sebastian? |
| xoPeace 2008-06-10 ch 8, | abusewow. I think this is my favorite chapter yet! it was pretty snazzy! I love how you said "cuckoo bananas" I'm constantly saying that. though my brother teases me. okay so the ending kindof confuses me for this chapter, I guess I have to wait until next chapter to find out more. which means...you need to update soon (: okay? haha. I love this story line and the concept in general. xoPeace |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-06-09 ch 8, | abuseOh my god! Tory brought Riley as her birthday present! Update soon! |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-06-08 ch 7, | abuseGreat update! I loved Dana's bluntness! Please update soon. |
| xoPeace 2008-04-23 ch 6, | abuseI found this last night when I couldn't sleep and then I couldn't stop reading it!! I lovee it! can't wait for another chapter! |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-04-20 ch 5, | abuseI know it's been a while since you updated this story, but I really like it. I'm actually writing a story similar about boarding school, too. I love your story. It's great and well-written. It could use some gramatical editing, but it's not that bad. Please udpate it! |