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simpleplan13 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseif I think about you... comma after you there's not day I stop wondering... capitalize the T don't wait for me if you're...capital D or you'll get drowned.. or you'll drown you can win but to lose too... comma before but the answer close and unattainable.. capitalize the T don't stop flying... never.. ever otherwise it's a double negative, which means stop flying I like this piece a lot... the Icarus reference was nice and the twist, which the water was really nice. I also love all the questions you ask. It was really awesome. NIce job!
XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseLove this poem to! Nice job! Keep up the great work! XKristie MarieX
Walrus Lover 2.0 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseI can't fly, otherwise I'd take your advice. -Wally