Quite an interesting poem you have here! I really like the mitochondria line. It's very direct, quite humorous too, plus it's got a strong voice. Nice work!

Hmm... again, very interesting piece. I'm afraid your writings aren't in a style that I'm used to reading, so it's hard for me to review, but this had an interesting concept and point of view. And for that, I like it a lot. :) Good job!

I really liked this poem, especially how it finished.

this is amazeing

Ha ha! Very good. It's very clever. I can definately see why this won. You're amazing!

I really enjoyed this; the simplicity of the language works well the message. At first I wasn't all that fond of the simile about the slippery soap because I thought it was a little too simple..but then I read on, and once I had a good feel of the tone, I thought it fit perfectly. Eloquent language might be purdyful, but it doesn't fit for every poem. And I thought this was a good testament to that.
Nice write =)

You know, it's too true. I really like this. In fact, I think I'll add it to my favorites.

Peace & Love

Westnedge ~> Park

I don't like fish but I LOVE this poem!

Did we really evolve from footprints?

-Wally