 Frosted Midnight 2008-08-30 . chapter 1I like this! momentary joy indeed ^_^. wow...its been a long time since I've reviewed anything...heh heh...erm...whoops? |
 Koki Enwai 2008-07-30 . chapter 1A temporary warm and fuzzy feeling. That's what I got. I love the simplicity of this; just perfect. Thanks for sharing it with us!
- Koki |
 Clarence 2008-03-14 . chapter 1 I don't like "boom" and "bang" next to each other. |
 Lone Lily in the Garden 2008-03-13 . chapter 1Pretty!! I love it!! |
 ADSpencer 2008-03-13 . chapter 1Excellent work. Very simplistic and natural, like a good haiku should be. I realy loved the second line. That was a genius way of capturing the moment. Great job! |
 Ygg 2008-03-13 . chapter 1Haha I really like the second line :-) Quite original! Keep up the good work. |
 Former Kimmi Gray 2008-03-12 . chapter 1Don't for get the ones that sounds like a sawed off shot gun. *nod* but this was well done. Yay! |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-12 . chapter 1I did get a warm feeling. (:
This brought back memories of summer night fireworks, and I like the mood of this piece.
It's simple and concise, and 'momentary joy' wraps up the poem nicely. |