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Frosted Midnight 2008-08-30 . chapter 1
I like this! momentary joy indeed ^_^. wow...its been a long time since I've reviewed anything...heh heh...erm...whoops?
Koki Enwai 2008-07-30 . chapter 1
A temporary warm and fuzzy feeling. That's what I got. I love the simplicity of this; just perfect. Thanks for sharing it with us!

- Koki
Clarence 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
I don't like "boom" and "bang" next to each other.
Lone Lily in the Garden 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Pretty!! I love it!!
ADSpencer 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Excellent work. Very simplistic and natural, like a good haiku should be. I realy loved the second line. That was a genius way of capturing the moment. Great job!
Ygg 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Haha I really like the second line :-) Quite original! Keep up the good work.
Former Kimmi Gray 2008-03-12 . chapter 1
Don't for get the ones that sounds like a sawed off shot gun. *nod* but this was well done. Yay!
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-12 . chapter 1
I did get a warm feeling. (:

This brought back memories of summer night fireworks, and I like the mood of this piece.

It's simple and concise, and 'momentary joy' wraps up the poem nicely.
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