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Reviews For: Blindfold

pinoy1 2008-09-19 ch 1,	abuseHello!! My Name is Bien Canonizado,I'm a visually-disabled (blind) graduate student from the Philippines. Just dropped by to express my admiration for your writing-style... You are possibly one of the most skilled web-based authors that I have encountered in my time as a fanatic of fantasy/science fiction. You should really try to finish your stories,specially this particular one that I am reviewing right now. I am re-posting this review cause my old post was erased when some one hacked my old account. You know,your writing means very much to me,recently I just lost my sense of sight;and quite honestly it has been so hard adjusting to a life without being able to pick-up another printed book. Currently,I depend on my computer to read stories to me on-line,this is with the help of a screen-reading program. And let me tell you,ever since I discovered fan-fiction I couldn't stop reading your great stories! Please understand,your stories give me the strength to continue... (I'll not dwell on that fact too much.) I believe your talents are a God-given gift so that you may bring happiness to those who value this particular genre. So, Please, Please, Please, Please... Do not give up on this story... Update faster! My only wish is if you could make your chapters longer,I think the reader would have an easier time if the story were written in a few long chapters,rather than several short parts. At least each chapter should be 3,0 words long for better continuity. Easier for us to follow if we did not have to back-track so often because of short chapters. I hope that you will one day decide to once-again write. Please don't give up... I hope that you will reply,because it was very hard for me to write this review since I am hoping that you will notice this short letter out of all the others that you get. Please do not think that I am just spammer,cause I am serious when I make this request. If you wish to reply, please do not use the reply feature of this website, instead please kindly send your comments to my e-mail It is written below with spaces and with the symbols spelled-out to avoid spammers. (Bienvenido S. Canonizado) Phone number:+63917-433-8194 Electronic mail:f e n r i s (at) p r i m e (dot) n e t(dot) p h "There are more things in heaven and earth Horatio,then are dreamt of in your Philosophy..."
ohthevoices 2008-07-19 ch 3,	abuseReview Marathon! (-is still pointing at link in profile-) I don't feel like I know the characters any better than when the story started. I feel like they're just...there. I don't feel any sort of attachment to them at all, which makes it hard to care about them. You might want to go over this again - there were some typos and awkward phrasings which were a little distracting.
ohthevoices 2008-07-19 ch 2,	abuseReview Marathon! (-points to profile-) The first paragraph was in present tense, which threw me off a bit because the rest of the chapter was in past tense. I'd probably change that paragraph to match the rest of the chapter. The whole thing with Sage and Korin meeting up in the market reminded me of Aladdin. Is there any of way they could meet? Because the whole thing - him having to jump in to save her from getting her hand chopped off, then pretending she's his sister - is straight from that movie, and that's all I could think of when I read that.
ohthevoices 2008-07-19 ch 1,	abuseReview Marathon! (If you're confused, there's an explanation on my profile.) I liked this as a prologue, because there was a lot of action as opposed to just the usual history textbook thing that seems to be common, and you described things well while keeping us in the dark as to what, exactly, was going on, making us want to read more to find out. I'm not sure about all the jumping around, though. It was a little confusing, though I can probably overlook that.
clair-a-net 2008-05-06 ch 11,	abusegood stuff. Why did he beat him up? I hope everything will be ok and she doesnt have to marry that mean prince.
Kittydog Lover 2008-05-05 ch 10,	abuseGood chapter. I like how the ballroom looks. Please Update soon.
Kittydog Lover 2008-05-02 ch 9,	abuseOh. Evil cliff hanger. Oh well... Update SOON!
clair-a-net 2008-04-30 ch 7,	abuseThis is a good story. I like it so far. Why wont Juno talk to others about her past? Why doesnt the king like her? Why is Liea trying to break her? Update soon so i can find out.
Kittydog Lover 2008-04-30 ch 7,	abuseGreat chapter! Update SOON! =D
Kittydog Lover 2008-04-29 ch 6,	abuseWow. That was unexpected. Hmm... Update SOON!! I want questions answered. Please...
AngelIvey22 2008-04-26 ch 5,	abuseWhoa! Excellent chapter! You are an amazing writer! If you are continueing to update this story on this website I certainatly can't wait! ~Ivey~
cyanidecandy 2008-04-20 ch 4,	abusegreat few chapters :) so u're not updating the story any longer? i visited ur livejournal but i couldn't find where to go for reading ur fictionpress stories. well, if you're updating here hope u can update soon !
GoGreenGirl 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI'm new to fiction press and this is the first thing I've read on it and so far I really like it.=-)
AngelIvey22 2008-04-03 ch 2,	abuseOh my goodness! That is an excellent story so far! I just absulutly love this! Please, please, PLEASE do not forget this story. ~Your #1 fan Ivey~~

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