Reviews for When You Own the Universe Redux

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Not Who I Look Like 2008-07-25 ch 1,	abuseOh, you're redoing it? why?
Lee 2008-06-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseI just finished the original of this and I loved it; but I do admit that your rewrite of the first chapter has made it even better. I think that continuing the editing process will make it better than good, exceptional actually. Your grammar and spelling mistakes have also much improved : ) Reading your story made this day into a good one and I'm certain it will prove to do the same for many others; keep up your awesome work! I'll definitely keep track of the updates ^^
blair powers 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abuseyou should definitely rewrite it! i love when you own the universe, a new version would rock!! :)
Whenmicegiveyoulemons 2008-05-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think the fact that she(Remembrance) doesn't remember why they hated each other ran more smoothly with the story, unlike here where I get an inkling she does. But you haven't finished editing yet so I'm sure it will make sense in the long run. I also noticed your input of Christopher Thaddington Vance Rinehart IV. That wouldn't be insomniac Chris Time after Time Chris Jonah's roomate Chris would it be? I remember that name mentioned before...I think. I would really like to read his story. I'm sure it would be nothing short of interesting- not to mention funny. How can a story about someone as quirky as him not be. Thanks for your stories Both this and QQR (and its sequel) are great and fun to read.
strodgfrgf 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuselove this story, so much. update PLEASE!
My Anh Nguyen 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseHello there Secretive! In all honesty I must agree with you that the first version of this story was disjointed, however we all love it nevertheless >=D But I am thrilled that you decided to do a Redux version of this story. Your writing has changed, of course, now it's a bit more mature than before. Can't wait to see what you are going to do with the characters and story now. I'm sure everyone would still be supporting you including me. Take care and write more!
I.Heart.Shi 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseIts very different. Remembrance doesnt sound so jaded...so far. What I like about your work is that it's about self-exploration and realization. Excited to see what this redux entails...hopefully its better than the first...which was AMAZING btw! hahaha u got a lot on your hands girlie!
Roman Candles 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is an awesome chapter, as usual. I love the changes so far. The characters seem a little more grown up in this version and they are a little more complex. Keep up the great work!
bitter-reflection 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed reading the original so I can't wait to read this one. Hope you update soon :D
Evolet Blue 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI love the idea of rewriting this. I loved the original version, but you could see the huge differnce between your writing at the beginning and at the end of the story. But I must say, I ADORED the 'teenage' part of your original fic, the first 10 chapters (or something like that). Anyway, your writng is amazing, and the whole plote rocks. love&peace
Hopelessly Clueless 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseYep, it sounds different, but it seems just as great! Update soon!! :D
VV 2008-03-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseI found this one way more straight forward and detailed. It's really great so far, but if you are really remaking ALL of this, you sure have a lot of work on your hands. Wanna add a boink scene in this one? : P -wink, wink-
ohbeep 2008-03-29 ch 1, anon.	abusewhoa. Remembrance sounds SO different. But I can't wait to read this version =D
Chowdizzle 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseHey! I am SO glad that you are rewriting this. Let me tell you why. I always look at the fav stories list of authors that I like to find new good stories, and WYOTU is on the fav list of so many authors that I like. I've tried to read it a few times... but to be honest I never really liked it (please don't take any offense). I couldn't get past the first chapter (I know that in a lot of fictionpress stories the first chapter is the weakest link - a lot of times even if I don't like the first chapter I continue on and end up loving the story) - it just wasn't my type. But this new version seems really good! Your writing style had definetely improved ALOT. I can't wait for your next update! :)
violet blossom 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseI was so excited when I found out about WYOTU Redux. I always love that story. I definitely will read this one too..

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