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| Leon Himura 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusei think that it is beautifully written and a very sad "story". The use of diction and the way you arranged the words is very compelling. Each word seems to convey its own emotions. i really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good writing! i look forward to your next upload. |