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Reviews For: Bathed in Bubbles

Leon Himura
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abusei think that it is beautifully written and a very sad "story". The use of diction and the way you arranged the words is very compelling. Each word seems to convey its own emotions. i really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good writing! i look forward to your next upload.
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