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| Lurid Black 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseSwee! It's great! I loved it, I'd only change 1 thing... the descriptions, like exactly what something might be like, lots of emotion, but I think that needs some more describing too, other than that it was ethereal, keep writing! |
| Stefan the Vampire 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo sweet, made my cry a bit to the end just 'cause it was so sweet. |
| Laurena 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseoh kno dont get so defense maddy i always knew u swang tht way...jks i love u even though ur a lesbian... |
| IrishCarBomb 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNice little oneshot, though I found it a tad funny you're so worried about readers getting the wrong impression of you. |