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ssmoochic 2008-08-31 ch 1,	abusei love this story, i hope shateal and chazara get together
Jacoblover 2008-08-31 ch 7,	abuseaggh! i really want to know what happens next. this was such a great chapter!! so good. i love all the characters, they're amazing. i can't wait for the next chapter. please update super soon!
chameleonduality 2008-08-27 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou finally updated! Yes! And... wow, what a chapter! So interesting, and it raises yet more questions. Why are all the physical signs of her Anguis gone? How did Shateal let 'her' out without Chazara's knowledge? We're seeing even more of the sadness and bitterness that lies at the heart of Chazara, and that's making her such a multi-layered character. The interaction and dialogue between Shateal and Chazara was, as always, gripping and enticing. I'm absolutely loving this, and I honestly can't wait for your next chapter. It'll be worth the wait, if the next one's anything like this one, but please don't make us wait as long for the next one please! ^.^ Peace.
Jevanminx 2008-08-26 ch 7,	abuseOh, weird, but cool. A good conversation with her other half there as well. JM
sleepy 2008-08-25 ch 7, anon.	abuseoh my gosh. i read this story, the un-edited version ages ago and it has always been one of my faves. so when i saw that you had updated, i was like, yes! i need to read this again! only to realize that you're reposting the chapters one at a time. this is killing me! i need my fix of complicated sexual tension, original plot, and the mysterious/super sexy Shateal! ack!
Lady Katreina 2008-08-25 ch 7,	abuseOne word. FRUSTRATION! ARGH! Anyways, ARGH!, I'm guess Shateal let her beyond OUT of the body Chazara. argh! Thank you for updating- you're cliffhangers are ... AH! My vocabulary is greatly reduced. Forgive me. Thanks again.
Hannah C. Thaw 2008-08-25 ch 7,	abuseGood chapter! I wonder what is going on. Why were they both naked if nothing happened? And in bed together? Sometimes she can be pretty nice, in fact that side is showing more then her Ice King side. But that might be just me... I can be a bit Ice King-ish myself, so I have a high tolerance of what is nice, what is just sarcastic and what is actually mean. Keep writing!
Somedaymydreamswillcome 2008-08-25 ch 7,	abuseOh my goodness! Yes! hahahah :) Finally a lot of interaction between them! Hmm. I think his Draco half and her Anguis half like each other. ;) :P hahahahha :D I love this story to bits...even better than the first story in this series! And that's saying something. :)
Lady Katreina 2008-07-02 ch 6,	abuseO, I love Chazara and Shateal is perfect. Thank you so much for updating, I love the way this story is progressing. Thank you.
ssmoochic 2008-06-27 ch 6,	abusegreat chapter, where did this male anguis come from. i almost thought that shateal wasn't going to be in this chapter at all, im glad he was though. cant wait for the next update, no matter what story it is i love them all!!
Sweet Child 2008-06-26 ch 6,	abuseI love it so far. Esecially the fact that you've come up with such an original storyline. I mean, there are so many stories out there about demons and supernatural beings, but you've managed to give the story a really personal twist. All in all, good work on that. The way that you let your characters interact is also very good. Thay didn't change drastically all of a sudden, but rather stayed the same. You also did very good work in explaining the relationship between Zar and her Aguis (I didn't catch her name). The only thing you have to work on is the way you're revealing the facts. The first chapter was highly confusing to read, since you were much too vague about it. Don't get me wrong, it's good to be vague, but not so if you don't reveal enough facts. It leaves the reader confused and disoriented, and most of the times the reader will give up on reading the rest. Otherwise great work, and I can't wait for the next installment. Kudos, also, for the long chapters. I love having something substantial to read, instead of just a couple of paragraphs.
Jevanminx 2008-06-26 ch 6,	abuseAw come on. I wanna know what he's doing now, hehehehe. I love her attitude, its great, and how she reacted with Cameal was great. JM
Chameleonduality 2008-06-26 ch 6, anon.	abuseI love these power plays Chazara gets herself into, they make for such interesting dialogue. The interaction with Cameal was well written. I don't particularly understand why this story still has so few reviews; it's exciting, fast paced and intruiging, but anyway... slight climax you left it on there - as long as you update a little faster than the last time, it's all good! You had a few spelling mistakes, nothing too big though - it's 'wear' not 'where'(although 2-inch stilettos aren't really that high). I'm really enjoying this story, so PLEASE update soon? ^.^ Peace.
Bellaria 2008-06-25 ch 6,	abusereally interesting, i liked the retake on that chapter. interesting insight on her and saints relationship and her take on working for cato. very good
dreamercrys 2008-06-25 ch 6,	abuseWhen are they just going to admit they like each other? Huh?!

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