Wonderful

Adorable, I loved the last line. Well done!

This is absolutely adorable. Nothing more to it than adorableness.

I am not quite sure if I get this swinging-on-clothesline concept (I am probably going to have to actually see it to understand what you mean), but this was really creative and cute and I loved it. Kudos to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:

I absolutely adored this piece, it was so cute and so well written.

Haha! That was really cute and funny! There is the best friend's cliche in it, but you've managed to keep it light! I've swung on a few clotheslines in my day. ;-)

Got a bit lazy, so decided to just leave a review without signing in to FP.

I thought it was good. I like the simplicity of it all, and how the characters fit with the story so nicely. It's just enough, not too cheesy, not too plain.

Loved it. :)

How entirely cute! He started it! Ha-ha :p I agree with that.

I wish I had a clothes line thing to swing on. We don't have one!

Grr. Oh well. Liked the story! Neato work!

i should log in, but i'm being lazy and using my iPod.

still, that was adorable!

Mitch is so awesomely real.

very cute oneshot,

i want my own fictional character.

i guess everyone does (:

Lol. Moral of the story is 16 year olds should not swing on clotheslines. This is a very fluffy story, but good all the same. Sometimes fluff's excellent, no? Great Job.

aw, this was so cute )

I guess it's a bit fluffy, and very goofy, but it's pretty funny. It's a good story.

that was an awesome story. It was very funny.

Good job

Oh my god, this was one of the most adorable things I have ever read! It;s so cute...great job! :P

that was cute, makes you go "aw..."

well done.