Reviews for My Life is NOT a Novel

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xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-08-18 ch 12,	abuseWell it is a little...um plain but it didn't give more insight on G. And yes I know for a fact that some people can make up pretty easily. People just have that kind of...uh..."mojo?" Unfortunately other people like say...myself...hold grudges and ruin things because they can't freakin' get revenge out of their little sadistic heads! Uh...well at least I know you're alive XD
Yereanth16 2008-08-16 ch 12,	abuseI love venus she so crazy and random it just funny. could it be she has a crush on michael, hm? lol and libba is a cool friend I wish my friends where as fun as her my life would never be bored. -Y-
L3G3nD 2008-08-15 ch 11,	abuseHey there again, it's me :P This chapter is not bad, I can see that V is writing diary in a more and more frequent basis. It seems she is bonding with her own diary, haha. Nice characterization though. Anyway, I'll stop here as for now. Good luck in your work :P Happy writing~ L~
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-08-12 ch 11,	abuseHm...not much I can say except cool. Micheal is seriously devious...I like, keeps people on their toes...or turns them to paranoid freaks. Anyways it's an easy going chapter and for Micheal...WHAT THE HECK MAN! DO YOU HAVE NO DIGNIGTY! I WOULD OF TOLD THEM TO OFF AND BURN IN HELL! Never crawl back to tards for friends! I suppose I have to much pride huh? XD
L3G3nD 2008-08-07 ch 10,	abuseHaha the duck actually said "Quack". LOL! Hmm nice chapter 9. A bit tension but overall a good chapter. I can see the underlying theme and it's really nice, clearly portraying how the community goes nowadays; Poor Michale. Anyway, nice work again. Haha Lady Liberty on the fourth of July! Independence Day? XD Oh, so I guess Lori's the culprit behind the whole thing. sigh Jealousy. Haha Vinny's gonna have another brotha or sista~ I see! lol! Not bad, these are getting more and more interesting. Will like to read more :P Happy writing, and I hope to hear from you soon. L~
L3G3nD 2008-08-07 ch 5,	abuse[Drinking alcoholic beverages kills brain cells, I heard this once. High-school social ladders and dances do the same.] LOL! Haha poor Vinny got dressed-up! XD MUSHU! OMG! lol, how the hell does pomegranate has a relation with Proserpina and Pluto! HAHA! Vinny's really a nerd, especially in term of astronomy. XD Haha Michigan without his fanclub in the library. XD Nice chapters. Made me laugh a lot, and I'll continue to read more. Hehe.. Happy writing~ L~
L3G3nD 2008-08-07 ch 4,	abuseHaha this is cute and funny. The encounter of Vinny with Michael is so really nice! (and also the diary enter of 12/10) Michael the duck. Haha...You really make my day! Anyway, I'll stop here. xD Happy writing~ L~
L3G3nD 2008-08-07 ch 1,	abuseHey there, haha, it's L here. Sorry it takes so long to review your story (I know I'm lazy, haha). First, I'd like to thank you for adding my story as your favourite and reading it. Thank you, hoho ^^ Well I really do laugh when I read this story. You've successfully break the ice and bond Venus with the reader via first person narration. They're are nice (unlike the other writers in FP) and good job for that! I like the way you use dashes conjoint words such as, who-knows-what, and etc. Those are really a core factor in making the readers laugh. XD Anyway, I'll reserve more comments for the future chapters. Nice chapter overall! Happy writing~ L~
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-07-20 ch 10,	abuseLOL you're so right. Life isn't packed with drama 24/7 although it'd be less boring if it was...but that's why we have movies and books and T.V...YAY ENTERTAINMENT! XD Cool chapter, nice and easy.
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-07-19 ch 9,	abuseWow somehow I saw that coming from the very beginning but I didn't know she'd be in peace with Micheal aka The Duck. Now that was unexpected...well more like really soon. Tch is Vinny was my friend I'd hunt the pathetic loser that did it and dip them ever so slowly in boiling oil or tar, heck I'd do both if I can't decided...okay that's enough of my sadistic compasion I liked the chapter and PLEASE keep going XD
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-06-30 ch 8,	abuseHonestly I think this is something you should come up with yourself...I know it's annoying when people say that but you're the writer and I think you of all people should know what would make the sequel more effective for the reader. But let me see...if the story is centered around Vinny then make it in her perspective or better yet make it her sibs point of view first then if you want you can make another story in her point of view to answer any questions that might leave readers in the dark. I was going to say make it all of their perspectives at once but that's too complicated and could discourage both you and the readers. Hope that helps XD
darling81 2008-06-28 ch 8,	abuseThe story seems to be progressing pretty well but I think it would be better with a little more detail or even some back story on when she started to get bullied. However, I do realize that is hard to accomplish with journal style writing. As others have mentioned there are typos which hinder the flow of your story, try getting a Beta reader to help you out a bit. Keep on writing, it can only get better and better :)
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-06-25 ch 7,	abuseWell that was rather mean of her. Must have gotten sick of the sarcastic hottie. Me personally I wouldn't have blown up and just keep on with the sarcasm battle until one of us got tired. But when he just shut down like that my goodness I was shocked, he has feelings! And she hurt the bastard! Hmm...why does that seem familiar to me? Anyways loved that confrontation but HATE is such a strong word. Does she really dislike him THAT much? He just seemed annoying to me. Nice chapter and YAY SUMMER VACATION! Now I have to find a damn job :/ not cool!
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-06-11 ch 6,	abuseAll right first things first...I know no one is perfect but you have typos...that's it...nothing more than that. Now I really liked it and expected a little more to happen but then again it's a journal. The Duck (since I forgot his real name) is pretty confident in himself...wonder if somehow that confidence would break down a little (heehee -evil look-). Keep it up!
xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-06-07 ch 5,	abuseWow I'm...officially creeped out by Vinny...she's...well I won't finish that since it will officially kill me from embarrassment. I like this, I was thinking of writing a journal style story somewhat similar to this I guess. Perhaps more angsty...anyways love her she's funny and who the heck would sign her up for the dance committie(did I spell that right? I little drowsy from a headache right now) If I was Vinny I would've hunt that b!#$h or ba$%@*d and set their severed limbs on fire! Heehee yeah I'm a weird aggressive little munchkin. Hence why my friend decided I should change my pen name to Evil Munchkin...enough of my pointless drabble, I likie so keep going. XD

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